Here are some sentences revised by the copy readers. See how the sentences have changed.

They officially meet once a month during the semester, and they would be camping for one night and two days on Global Campus this summer vacation.
▶ They officially meet once a month during the semester, and they will go camping for two days and one night on the Global Campus this summer vacation.

- News Desk

The concert is flexible to participate in only one or both of the talks.
▶ Participants may attend only one or both of the talks.

- News Desk

It is not the club is run by itself, but several people lead the club together.
▶ A club is not run by an individual, but rather several people lead the club together.

- News Desk

I checked that North Korean defector has never visited HUFS and gave a lecture.
▶ I checked and found that North Korean defectors had never visited HUFS and given a lecture.

- Round Talk

Wherever from you are, one’s changes have powerful potential to the whole society.
▶ No matter where you are from, changes by individuals have powerful potential to effect society at large.

- Round Talk

South Koreans do not seem to think North Korea much as a threat.
▶ South Koreans do not seem to think of North Korea as much of a threat.

- Cover Story