Update : 2018.06.12  Tue  No : 495
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Here are some sentences revised by the copy readers. See how the sentences have changed.


They officially meet once a month during the semester, and they would be camping for one night and two days on Global Campus this summer vacation.
▶ They officially meet once a month during the semester, and they will go camping for two days and one night on the Global Campus this summer vacation.

- News Desk

The concert is flexible to participate in only one or both of the talks.
Participants may attend only one or both of the talks.

- News Desk

It is not the club is run by itself, but several people lead the club together.
A club is not run by an individual, but rather several people lead the club together.

- News Desk

I checked that North Korean defector has never visited HUFS and gave a lecture.
▶ I checked and found that North Korean defectors had never visited HUFS and given a lecture.

- Round Talk

Wherever from you are, one’s changes have powerful potential to the whole society.
No matter where you are from, changes by individuals have powerful potential to effect society at large.

- Round Talk

South Koreans do not seem to think North Korea much as a threat.
▶ South Koreans do not seem to think of North Korea as much of a threat.

- Cover Story

2018.06.12  No : 495
 
How Was the Korean Spring S
The Perks of Being a Wallfl
Call Me by Your Name
Two Sides of High Intellige
Running a Marathon for Equa
Denuclearization: the Key t
HUFS Creates ‘HUFS x HUFS A
HUFS Responds to Fourth Ind
 
Opinion  
Editorial
The Perks of Being a Wallflower
HUFSan’s Voice
Two Sides of High Intelligence
Opinion
Denuclearization: the Key to Peace of Mind
Epilogue
The Argus Swimming Below the Surface
Proofreading
Learning English Through Revision
# Rapport
A close and harmonious relationship in ...
A Cartoon
Watch Out for Poisoned Apples
Newsdesk  
HUFS Creates ‘HUFS x HUFS Alumni Mentoring’
HUFS Responds to Fourth Industrial Revolution
HUFS Introduces Innovative Convergence Major
Student Counseling Center Uses Fine Art to Counsel Students
Working Women Give Advice to HUFSans
HUFSans Prepare Spring Festival
HUFS Opens 8th Russian Discussion Contest
HUFS Recruits Prospective Software Specialists
ISO Holds HUFS’ GOT TALENT Contest
New Library To Come to HUFS by 2020
Campus  
Cover Story
How Was the Korean Spring Seen from the Outside?
The Argus Prize
The Argus Prize 2018 English Essay Contest
The Argus Prize
Finding My Ithaca
The Argus Prize
Why Young Humanities Majors Still Have Hope in the Age of Artificial Intelligence
The Argus Prize
#MeToo, Small Fingers Make a Big Change
National  
Reportage
Running a Marathon for Equality
News Briefing
Round Talk
We Study N·K at HUFS
Culture  
Review
Call Me by Your Name
Rendez-vous
Who Makes the Invisible Visible
Culture Trip
Feeling Store, a Journey to Face Ourselves