Here are some sentences revised by the copy readers. See how the sentences have changed.
Russian President Vladimir Putin appeared in a reality show as a protagonist, appealing with his folksy charm.
▶ Russian President Vladimir Putin appeared on a reality show as a protagonist, appealing to the audience with his folksy charm.
- News Briefing
We sometimes get the offer for beautifying the walls, and we only accept it if it is for the walls that can be seen and felt by many people.
▶ We sometimes get the request to beautify walls, and we only accept if it is for walls that can be seen and enjoyed by many people.
- Round Talk
Off-campus activities, on the other hand, we should take a close look on the work and restore it constantly.
▶ For off-campus activities, on the other hand, we should keep a close eye on the work and touch it up constantly.
- Round Talk
Heart Signal gave me a feeling that they are living and dating in a different world.
▶ Heart Signal made me feel like they were living and dating in a different world.
- Culture Insight
Therefore, it is a realistic and practical alternative that can contribute the promotion of students’ convenience and welfare.
▶ Therefore, it is a realistic and practical alternative that can contribute to the welfare of students and increase their convenience.
- In-depth on Campus