Update : 2018.10.02  Tue  No : 497
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Here are some sentences revised by the copy readers. See how the sentences have changed.


Russian President Vladimir Putin appeared in a reality show as a protagonist, appealing with his folksy charm.
▶ Russian President Vladimir Putin appeared on a reality show as a protagonist, appealing to the audience with his folksy charm.

- News Briefing

We sometimes get the offer for beautifying the walls, and we only accept it if it is for the walls that can be seen and felt by many people.
▶ We sometimes get the request to beautify walls, and we only accept if it is for walls that can be seen and enjoyed by many people.

- Round Talk

Off-campus activities, on the other hand, we should take a close look on the work and restore it constantly.
For off-campus activities, on the other hand, we should keep a close eye on the work and touch it up constantly.

- Round Talk

Heart Signal gave me a feeling that they are living and dating in a different world.
▶ Heart Signal made me feel like they were living and dating in a different world.

- Culture Insight

Therefore, it is a realistic and practical alternative that can contribute the promotion of students’ convenience and welfare.
▶ Therefore, it is a realistic and practical alternative that can contribute to the welfare of students and increase their convenience.

- In-depth on Campus

2018.10.02  No : 497
 
Assa The Popularity of the
Be True to Yourself
We Inspire Passion and Devo
What Does Hangeul Mean to Y
The Revival of Reality Dati
Learning English Through Re
MeToo Movements in HUFS Not
HUFS Opens Civil Lecture of
 
Opinion  
Editorial
Be True to Yourself
Road Casting
What Does Hangeul Mean to You
Proofreading
Learning English Through Revision
A Cartoon
Unshackle Yourself
#Violet
Newsdesk  
MeToo Movements in HUFS Not Finished Yet
HUFS Opens Civil Lecture of Chinese Humanities
HUFS Joins Hands with Korea Business News
Global Campus Introduces DIY Ramen Cafe
HUFS Cooperates with Turkey on Education and Culture
HUFS Professors Enlighten Local Community
Campus  
In-depth on Campus
GlobeeDorm: How Can It Be Improved?
people
Let’s Work, Dream and Protest with the Youth
National  
Cover Story
Assa The Popularity of the Unpopular
Round Talk
We Inspire Passion and Devotion
News Briefing
Social Insight
What Happened after Introducing the 52-hour Work Week?
Youth Casting
Shining a Light on Elderly Education
Culture  
Culture Insight
The Revival of Reality Dating Shows
Culture Insight
The 4IR is Here! Are You Ready?
Review
Microhabitat - the Story of Homes, Life,and Happiness