Update : 2018.11.01  Thu  No : 498
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And why such a fuss for the Korean makeup?
And why such a fuss over Korean makeup?

- Cover Story

Shinhan Financial Group administers finances, and KOTRA will provide opportunities of working abroad by utilizing overseas network and infrastructure.
Shinhan Financial Group manages finances, and KOTRA will provide opportunities to work abroad by utilizing its overseas network and infrastructure.

- News Desk

Animals are in a tragedy because they are made to put their bodies in a small cage, making it extremely hard to move.
Animals are in a tragic situation because they are forced to live in a small cage, making it extremely hard for them to move.

- In-depth on National

In addition, a refugee can apply for a working after six months of application.
In addition, a refugee can apply for a work visa from six months after the initial application.

- Reportage

An arrogant prince, who denies to help an eldery woman in the middle of the night gets cursed by her and thus turns into a beast.
An arrogant prince, who refuses to help an eldery woman in the middle of the night, gets cursed by her and thus turns into a beast.

- HUFSan’s Voice

2018.11.01  No : 498
 
Riding the New K-wave with
Courage to Accept
What True Beauty Is from a
Cultural Diversity Celebrat
Ceasefire - the Start of Pe
I Want to Be Free from the
Indonesian President Gives
HUFS Establishes Korea’s Fi
 
Opinion  
Editorial
Courage to Accept
HUFSan's Voice
What True Beauty Is from a Hijabi’s Point of View
HUFSan’s Voice
Ceasefire - the Start of Peace in the Korean Peninsula
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Cartoon
Find Your Color
# Orange
Newsdesk  
Indonesian President Gives Special Lecture to HUFSans
HUFS Establishes Korea’s First Georgian Lecture
HUFS Takes Lead in Overseas Employment
School’s Issues Remain Untouched
HUFS Startup Club Wins First Prize
HUFS Joins Hands with Latvia
Campus  
24/7@HUFS
Cultural Diversity Celebrated at the World Folk Culture Festival
Feature
Challenge and Response - What Adversity Says to Us
National  
In-depth on National
I Want to Be Free from the Cage!
Reportage
Where Should Refugees Go?
Social Insight
Another Big Property: Nation Brand
Culture  
Cover Story
Riding the New K-wave with K-beauty
Photo Essay
Halal Guys Guide You to a New World
Review
What Is the Goal?